The Vegas Trip (Timeline included)

[Downthestretch55]

The screenplay looks good but needs to be tweaked.
Might help with a bit more "flesh" and less losing.
Definitely a movie, but not a "chick flick".

She says: "Honey, do you want to go see a movie tonight?"
He says: "What did you have in mind?"
She says: "All my girlfriends are telling me to see...blah, blah blah"
He says: We either go to see "Scavs on the Grill" or we see nothin'. It's a dick flick. You coming or not?